Global warming is one of the biggest threats to our enviroment. What causes global warming? What solutions are there to this problem?

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day, one of the greatest issues in our environment is Global warming. I cannot argue with

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statement, because global warming gives a bad impact on our world and the reason why it has happened is because of the overconsumption of fossil

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with, global warming is an issue that happened because the effect of many states cannot control the

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of fossil

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. Fossil

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is an unrenewable

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that has been used by many countries. Most of the country need

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type of

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for factory and running car. When it is used for those two things it produces pollutants because of the effect of incomplete combustion.

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substance covers ozone so it makes the heat cannot release into the atmosphere but is reflected again on our earth, and as a ,result the temperature is rising and global warming has happened.

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they cannot control the usage of

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and the result is the temperature there that normally below zero degrees Celcius right now is increasing.

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, we can see how overconsumption can lead to global warming. The

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problem can be solved if many countries have the same mindset to find another

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as electricity and

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potential renewable

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in their country.

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, the

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of electric

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has been proven can help to run the

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. Electricity is used to run the machine inside the

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and it is not produced any pollution,

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it has the same horsepower as the old type of car.

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the cost is the problem with

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, it is already proved that it is cheaper than diesel

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day electric

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have been produced by the tesla company, and they can run well

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as diesel

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, even though the price is expensive but you don't need to do regular maintenance

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as changing the oil, so in the long term, it becomes cheaper than the car that using fossil

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, using potential renewable

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as wind and heat from the sun. Several countries already

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energy

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as the Netherlands which used the wind to produce

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to run their factory or South Africa which changed from fossil

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their factories to the

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of solar panels. All in all,

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issue can be solved if we can change the

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of fossil

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by using another

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as electricity that has been proven can be used in vehicles, and using another potential renewable

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as wind or heat that can be used to run on the factory.

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, if we want to solve

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biggest threat, we need to start changing the

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of fossil

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now, so they will not produce any pollutants that can give more harm to our earth.