In many countries, traditional dress and costumes are considered efective ways of maintaining links with the past. How ef ective can traditional costumes be, in this sense? What other ways exist to help citizens connect with a country’s past?
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people
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to wear simple homemade Wrong verb form
used
clothes
which was shows their culture
also
we can easily identify by
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them by
clothes
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their clothes
clothes
.
In my point of view, If we are wearing our traditional dress, it will definitely maintain our culture
. For example
, India's prime minister Shree Narendra Modi always get
dressed in Correct subject-verb agreement
gets
the
India's Correct article usage
apply
culture
. Rather he is in the
India or attending any global summit Correct article usage
apply
as a result
. On the other hand
, all other
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the other
country
's representatives are in suits and formal clothes
. Moreover
, it is also
useful for our children. They should know our country
's tradition
. Fix the agreement mistake
traditions
As a result
, they can fill pride for
their Change preposition
in
country
.
Furthermore
, there are many other ways to save country's
traditional pride. Correct article usage
the country's
Such
as, maintaining our heritage sites. For instance
, in the
Gujarat state, there are some heritage sites which was around 5000 years old which shows Correct article usage
apply
that
how Correct word choice
apply
much
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many
indians
are old. And, the Gujarat government maintains Change the capitalization
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that
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those
sites
very well. We should teach history to our children. More, the government can organize different Fix the agreement mistake
site
type
of stage plays which contain old knowledge. Fix the agreement mistake
types
Also
, filmmaker produce
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film
which is based on heritage and our Add an article
the film
a film
country
's old identity.
To conclude, we can say that, it is
surely save Unnecessary verb
apply
country's
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a country's
culture
by
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through
people
's behaviour to
others. It Change preposition
towards
also
depends on how people
can Correct your spelling
interact
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with Correct your spelling
interact
other
, Fix the agreement mistake
others
how
they can behave with other.Correct word choice
and how
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