In many countries, traditional dress and costumes are considered efective ways of maintaining links with the past. How ef ective can traditional costumes be, in this sense? What other ways exist to help citizens connect with a country’s past?
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their clothes
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.
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culture
. Use synonyms
For example
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the
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Moreover
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tradition
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traditions
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Furthermore
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country's
traditional pride. Correct article usage
the country's
Such
as, maintaining our heritage sites. Linking Words
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apply
much
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many
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Indians
that
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those
sites
very well. We should teach history to our children. More, the government can organize different Fix the agreement mistake
site
type
of stage plays which contain old knowledge. Fix the agreement mistake
types
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country
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is
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country's
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a country's
culture
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by
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through
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