In many countries, traditional dress and costumes are considered efective ways of maintaining links with the past. How ef ective can traditional costumes be, in this sense? What other ways exist to help citizens connect with a country’s past?

Nowadays,
people
are changed as time
changed
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. So,
people
use to change
in
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their daily activities and fashion sense. Like, in the past
people
ware
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to wear simple homemade
clothes
which was shows their
culture
also
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clothes
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. But now the community changed their fashion so they were modern
clothes
. In my point of view, If we are wearing our traditional dress, it will definitely maintain our
culture
.
For example
, India's prime minister Shree Narendra Modi always
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dressed in
the
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India's
culture
. Rather he is in
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India or attending any global summit
as a result
.
On the other hand
, all
other
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country
's representatives are in suits and formal
clothes
.
Moreover
, it is
also
useful for our children. They should know our
country
's
tradition
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traditions
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.
As a result
, they can fill pride
for
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their
country
.
Furthermore
, there are many other ways to save
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traditional pride.
Such
as, maintaining our heritage sites.
For instance
, in
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Gujarat state, there are some heritage sites which was around 5000 years old which shows
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how
much
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indians
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are old. And, the Gujarat government maintains
that
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those
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sites
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very well. We should teach history to our children. More, the government can organize different
type
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of stage plays which contain old knowledge.
Also
, filmmaker
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film
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which is based on heritage and our
country
's old identity. To conclude, we can say that, it
is
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surely save
country's
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culture
by
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people
's behaviour
to
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others. It
also
depends on how
people
can
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interact
intract
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interact
with
other
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others
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,
how
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and how
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they can behave with other.
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