Countries with long average working hours are economically more successful than those countries which do not work long hours. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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day and age, shortening working

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is a popular trend in many developed countries. Even still, some claimed that countries, where workers have to work for a longer time, can achieve greater economic success. I personally do not agree with

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notion,

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understand why working

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are positively linked to the national economy. Admittedly, with longer working

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productivity seems to become greater. An extension of working time means more products could be made and more services could be provided on a daily basis.

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, businesses can generate more revenue from their extra output and the overall economic outlook of the whole

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can reap benefit from

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.

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, workers, as human beings, would be most likely to feel tired after overworking.

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, their productivity cannot be guaranteed and in turn, the aforementioned benefit from long working

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may not be obvious as we thought it would be. The primary reason why longer working

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do not equalize higher economic achievement is that the scientific development of a

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is more relevant to a

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's progress. In

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technological era, exclusive and advancing knowledge of modern physics, chemistry and biology, which can be applied in a practical world, can bring about much more profits than merely increasing working

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, recent research by the US government shows that 90% of revenue from selling an iPhone belongs to Apple company which provides technical guidance and design knowledge.

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, only less than 4% of the revenue belongs to factories that assemble these gadgets,

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workers in these factories have to work more than 10

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per day and 6 days per week.

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, it is conclusively clear that long working

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must be not the most important factor in economic development. In conclusion, as a high technological level is the most dominant factor for a

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to become wealthy, to claim that a

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with longer working

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will become more successful is completely ill-founded. It can be predicted that a growing number of countries would apply themselves to boost their technologies as well as reduce domestic working

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in the future.