Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?
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centers
conduct the conventional theory-based learning Change the spelling
centres
system
rather than trying to a balanced Use synonyms
system
with more practical. I totally agree and will provide relevant evidence to prove Use synonyms
that
the opinion of some people who believes that it must be updated into a new Correct word choice
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system
including more practical sessions from the primary to post-graduate levels.
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learnings
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learning
based
on the experience in our life from birth. If we consider two groups of science students one group has sufficient laboratory facilities than the other group, the student who Add a missing verb
are based
learn
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learns
practical
tests will get higher results in the exam than the other group. Replace the word
practice
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are
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consists
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consist
with
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certain
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a certain
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.
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countryside
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just
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who just
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passed out
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cannot do simple things in their home or in the working location even Change the spelling
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they
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if they
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an
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a balance
balance
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balancing
learning
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the learning
system
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on
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instead
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