Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Self-confidence is the most important factor for success in school or at work.Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
In general, I think
this
thing passes various in everyone's life
.Because all people do not go the same way
to success
.Everyone's worldview is different.Someone may lean on the other person who may be his father,brother,familiarity or others.It means they do not go the way
to success
which self-confidence and they are afraid of making independent decisions in their life
.But,the other type of people are self-confident and once in a blue moon forward help to them from others.Most of the time successful people who are the best at work or school apply this
way
to achieve success
in their life
and I support this
way
of success
in my life
many times.For example
,approximately three or two years ago when I was learning at school.We had an event
during all of the high classes in my school.Naturally,I attended with my classmates like in other classes.I was the captain of our team
.That event
was a history major.There were five parts of that event
for each team
.These were introduction (greeting the judges of the party),question-answer,scene view,captaincy competition and free topic.Then
the event
started.Our team
was doing very well until the fourth part
, but in the fourth part
itself, we had a drop in points and all hope rested in the next
fifth part
which was the captains' contest. If am not mistaken, we were five scores behind the first
team
.Finally
, there was a fifth part
all of the captains accepted a list with ten perfect questions on it.Ten minutes were given to everyone.After the timeout, the team
captain's results were announced, and with two more goals than the first
team
's captain, we were six points ahead of them.I think,
I got a valuable win for my Remove the comma
apply
team
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite