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Many students think school classes are boring and useless.

#students #school #classes
Many students think lessons are boring at
school
. But l do not think classes are boring at
school
. Because we all information at
school
. We get elementary
education
 at
school
. If elementary
education
 is bad we are not ignorant. I do not agree edea . I think all children are good at reading they are a future big people. The lessons never boring at
school
 ,because us good
education
. The teachers always use control. We are studying for a portion of the
school
 . When young good
education
 after . We are
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not have
now have
nothave
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not have
a difficult future .
For example
 : l am not educated at
school
 nowadays l am learning very difficult English . Children
first
 teaching is at distinguishing.children always read a lot of books . Because a person 's speech increase. Young learn a lot because not difficult big people.
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