Many people think modern communication technology is having some negative effects on social relationships. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,
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new comers
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believe that
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communication
technology
is having a huge bad impact on public relationships. I agree with
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notion,
Technology
is good for nations and human
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development but
it's
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effect
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on
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people
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personal life and they contributed to
change
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the
person
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behaviour I will discuss in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin
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communication
is much
more
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easier and all new youths are connected
him
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because they are complex and comfortable
for
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all kinds of work or study due to every working place are now provided
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for their volunteers and they are going far away for their family. To
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explain
expalin
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, Modern
technology
are
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playing with
people
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lives because every massive
are
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addicted
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for
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this
item and they are doing
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role in human health because when
the
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technology
are
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faster humanity
are ignore
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every important
things
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such
as family and friends.
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communicate
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is easy and people forget their home country due to their home resident are waiting for their sons and daughters who
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abroad for work or study and they
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back
their
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birthplace because they send money each
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for their guardian and they forget their
parents
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relationship with him. To commence with the disagreement, When the communicated
technology
is advancing
regions
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recession will
increasing
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because they
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their online calls apps on social media
and
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fresh generations are attracted
with
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them and they follow
this
trend, but it is not
bad
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consequences for public
relation
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.
In other words
,
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with connected feelings with others and
communication
is good for
developing
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world
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and their students learning new skills with the help of
technology
each day.
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communication
headquarters are introduced
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method
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of
talk
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such
as wireless phones and they think it's cheap and reliable and they guarantee
for
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their community it
is not effect
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on
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social
relation
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. In conclusion,
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planet is good for
communication
technology
making because they have
a
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benefits for
the
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future life
although
sometime
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over
limit
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are destroy the modern earth and
communicate
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communication
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is good for everyone without
of
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harmful impact.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • face-to-face interactions
  • messaging apps
  • social media
  • non-verbal cues
  • family bonds
  • dependency
  • digital communication
  • superficial relationships
  • cyberbullying
  • online harassment
  • social isolation
  • virtual connections
  • emotional satisfaction
  • real-life interactions
  • technological intrusion
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