Many people think modern communication technology is having some negative effects on social relationships. Do you agree or disagree?
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newcomers
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newcomers
advance
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communication
technology
is having a huge bad impact on public relationships. I agree with this
notion, Technology
is good for nations and human beings
development but Change noun form
beings'
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it's
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its
effect
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the effect
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on
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people
personal life and they contributed to Change noun form
people's
change
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changing
person
behaviour I will discuss in the upcoming paragraphs.
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person's
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with the agreement, These days communication
is much more
easier and all new youths are connected Change the word
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him
because they are complex and comfortable Change preposition
to him
for
all kinds of work or study due to every working place are now provided Change preposition
with
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the facility
a facility
facility
for their volunteers and they are going far away for their family. To Fix the agreement mistake
facilities
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explain
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explain
technology
are
playing with Change the verb form
is
people
lives because every massive Change noun form
people's
are
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is
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addicted
addcited
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addicted
for
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to
this
item and they are doing crucial
role in human health because when Add an article
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the
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technology
are
faster humanity Change the verb form
is
are ignore
every important Change the verb form
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things
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thing
such
as family and friends. For example
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communication
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not
back Add a missing verb
are not
their
birthplace because they send money each Change preposition
to their
months
for their guardian and they forget their Change to a singular noun
month
parents
relationship with him.
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parents'
technology
is advancing regions
recession will Change noun form
regions'
region's
increasing
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increase
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their online calls apps on social media Wrong verb form
advertise
and
fresh generations are attracted Correct word choice
apply
with
them and they follow Change preposition
to
this
trend, but it is not bad
consequences for public Add a missing verb
have bad
relation
. Fix the agreement mistake
relations
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with connected feelings with others and Fix the agreement mistake
Relationships
communication
is good for developing
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the developing
world
and their students learning new skills with the help of Correct article usage
the world
technology
each day. For instance
, In the UAE communication
headquarters are introduced new
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a new
method
of Fix the agreement mistake
methods
talk
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talking
such
as wireless phones and they think it's cheap and reliable and they guarantee for
their community it Change preposition
apply
is not effect
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does not effect
on
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apply
relation
.
In conclusion, Replace the word
relationships
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planet is good for Correct article usage
the Advance
communication
technology
making because they have a
benefits for Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
the
future life Correct article usage
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limit
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communication
of
harmful impact.Change preposition
apply
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