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Most countries allow 18year old to start driving a car. Some say it is good to allow driving at that age.Others think that the age to start driving should be at least 25 years.Discuss both views.

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One of the highest controversial issues, today relates to whether or not the teaching of foreign
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kindergarten should be obligatory. I strongly agree with
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 view due to several reasons as follow On one
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 they are people who believed that
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 outweigh its disadvantage. The main reason
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 that adults happen to have more flexible abilities than the
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 wise. There is to say in all aspects children tend to not
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 whatever they learn and how they learn. They are inclined to be more vulnerable to accept whatever they are being taught and
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 them
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adult
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adults
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.
For instance
, my cousin learned
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 and now he is able to use
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 his native.
On the other hand
, some argue that unlikely children adult has more abilities and learn faster because they can select the main themes, they need to go
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 with their lives beside due to the purpose they require them to learn they
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postpone not even a single day since in the
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 the outcome is fruitful.
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, my high
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had to learn German and so it took no more than three months to master everything since he had to get paid after
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 it seems to be that regardless of studying for a purpose at a late age
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still
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in
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 advantage because not only
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can improve they after they but
also
 they have the chance to
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waiting
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 alone way
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 the adults who rush up only to get a diploma and without
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 year of
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 and experiences.
Therefore
, in my
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 primary education at
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 early age is above everything else
although
 due to some curriculum differences some people do not have the opportunities to learn at
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 young age in primary
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. I kindly recommend
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 of education
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chance
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 the curriculum whereby learning English
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school
 becomes a priority.
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