Elders say that life was better in past compared to life today. Do you think they are right or wrong based on your knowledge or experience?
Old
people
think that Use synonyms
the
Correct article usage
apply
life
before was better than Use synonyms
life
Use synonyms
now a days
. Correct the word
nowadays
This
is because they were happier living in the Linking Words
village
with Use synonyms
less
Change the quantifier
fewer
people
. I think, that they are correct because Use synonyms
life
in the Use synonyms
village
is Use synonyms
also
not the same.
Linking Words
First
of all, Linking Words
life
before was doing all things together like Use synonyms
family
. They all have to do work because there Add an article
a family
was
no machines to help Change the verb form
were
this
was Linking Words
good
way for families to understand each other. If a farmer in the Add an article
a good
village
in the past Use synonyms
need
to make Replace the word
needed
harvest
he depend on his sons to help him and they do work together and Correct article usage
a harvest
live
together. Wrong verb form
lived
This
Linking Words
life
totally changed today as we have Use synonyms
Add an article
a tractor
the tractor
tractor
and Fix the agreement mistake
tractors
other machine
to do Change the wording
another machine
other machines
job
of 10 Add an article
the job
people
. So sons go to find other jobs and family not stay together and so the old Use synonyms
people
feel Use synonyms
life
today is not good like past.
Use synonyms
Secondly
, there is more pollution problem everywhere because there is traffic. Linking Words
This
is Linking Words
main
reason for Add an article
the main
lot
of health Change the article
a lot
problem
so Fix the agreement mistake
problems
the
old Correct article usage
apply
people
don’t like Use synonyms
life
today. Most of the small Use synonyms
village
in eastern Europe has no farmers all are doing factory job Use synonyms
for example
and Linking Words
this
factory is far so all have to take transport or take their car so it is making too much pollution everywhere. The old Linking Words
people
not working in nature but in factor these days and so they get the feeling that Use synonyms
life
was better in past.
To summarize, many old Use synonyms
people
like Use synonyms
the
Correct article usage
apply
life
in the past and I think it is right because they are not happy working in Use synonyms
factory
or when Add an article
a factory
the factory
the
children go away to work.Change the word
their
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite