The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018.

The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018.
The table charts provide information on the
temperatures
and time of
daylight
in
London
and
Sydney
during a weekend in December 2018.
Overall
, in
Sydney
, the
temperatures
recorded over three consecutive days were relatively consistent
whereas
there were some fluctuations in
temperatures
in
London
.
In addition
, despite being warmer,
London
enjoyed fewer
daylight
timings than
Sydney
. It can be seen that the
temperatures
in
London
varied inconsiderably from Friday to Sunday with the highest figure being 13
°C
and the lowest one being 3
°C
. Meanwhile, the
temperatures
in
Sydney
were twice as high as those in
London
, with the maximum figure during the day being 31
°C
and the minimum one
being
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17
°C
On top of that, the average number of
daylight
hours
in
Sydney
was approximately 15
hours
, with the sun often rising at about 6 a.
m
and declining at about 8 p.
m
.
However
, in
London
, sunrise time was much later at about 8 a.
m
and the timing of sunset was earlier at about 3 p.
m
. The average number of
daylight
hours
in
this
city was approximately 8
hours
.
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