Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays apply many
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believe children should do unpaid society service more than play a game or do other activities in their free time. Society and Use synonyms
youngster
will benefit from Fix the agreement mistake
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unpaid society.
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of all,I think I strongly agree with Linking Words
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concept,and I will show you two logics why I agree with Linking Words
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idea.The Linking Words
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reason is youngster will have more vision Linking Words
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if they can know Use synonyms
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what career their want to be in the future.Linking Words
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, if young peoples work in a hospital they will be aware of the various careers that are available in the hospital and will have enough information to Linking Words
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reason is that they can help other Linking Words
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because sometimes a community job is to help Use synonyms
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in the hospital or clean up the streets in the city. I believe they can make our country better than it was before. Use synonyms
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clean up roads, they will make the country purer, and if young Use synonyms
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help in the hospital, they can help wounded Use synonyms
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go to find a doctor or healing place in the hospital so I think Use synonyms
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is helpful to our country.
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should do unpaid work service for the community if they have free time because Use synonyms
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and the community.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite