Your next-door neighbour likes to listen to music late at night. Because of the loud music, you often lose sleep. Write a letter to the neighboor. In your letter describe the situation explain the problems it is causing you offer at least one solution

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Dear Ravi, I regret to write

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letter as I could not get nice sleep during night

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due to the loud noise along with some drum sounds too and I was completely exhausted to get proper sleep and not sure how do I manage my day at the workplace which is critical and hectic schedule with back to back calls. As you know I am working for the local community hospital which requires a lot of attention during the patient visits despite having five hours at an emergency block.

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, unfortunately, I am unable to focus on my work at the hospital as I am exhausted without rest at home since there is an enormous sound like a warship moment in my room. I know you would love to listen to music and be crazy at some albums.

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, I would offer a solution to have it daily during day

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, I can have a nice sleep at night

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,you go on over the weekend nights as I do not have work and if possible I

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join you to have a musical party over the weekends. I look forward to hearing a response with the good news of no music at night

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during weekdays and I cannot wait to join in the weekend party. cheers.!! Best regards Best regards Lakshmi.

singmaheshSat Dec 03 2022

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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Your next-door neighbour likes to listen to music late at night. Because of the loud music, you often lose sleep. Write a letter to the neighboor. In your letter describe the situation explain the problems it is causing you offer at least one solution

Many people believe,humen health standards is going to fail in the future.Do you agree or disagree this statement.

Online shopping has become more popular than before.discuss causes and effects of this trend.

Differences between countries become less evident each year. Nowadays all over the world, people share the same fashions, advertising, brands, eating habits, TV channels. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?