Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

To begin

with,Nowadays apply many

people

believe children should do unpaid public service more than play a game or do other activities in their free time. Society and

teenagers

will benefit from

this

unpaid society. So,I think I strongly agree with

this

concept,and I will show you two logic why I agree with

this

idea. The

first

reason is

teenagers

will have more vision in careers,when young

people

do community works their will do different jobs and I think

this

is good for

teenagers

if there can know

first

what career their want to be in the future.

For example

, if young peoples work in a hospital they will be aware of the various careers that are available in the hospital and will have enough information to decide

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future whether their want to work in the hospital or not.  The

second

reason is that they can help other

people

because sometimes a public job is to help

people

in the hospital or clean up the streets in the city. I believe they can make our country better than it was before.

For instance

,if

teenagers

clean up roads, they will make the country purer, and if young

people

help in the hospital, they can help wounded

people

go to find a doctor or healing place in the hospital so I think

this

is helpful to our country. In conclusion, I completely believe

teenagers

should do unpaid work services for apply society if they have free time because

this

is beneficial for both

teenagers

and the community.