In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or book because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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days no one will purchase
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of newspapers or even
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books
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due to they easily get read on
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internet
without spending
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money. I largely disagree with
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notion.
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on certain
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heath
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issue
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issues
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caused
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caused
from
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online
resources
and not fully reliable on
internet
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for all
time
.
Firstly
,
although
on
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online
resources
offers all e-newspaper and books
on
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just one click
but
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it will
causes
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eye
problems. More reliability
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online will lead
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to detrimental
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effect
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on
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cornea because of
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hazardous radiation from gadget’s
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screens
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.
For example
, digital
eye
strain disorder is common nowadays among youngsters because of
high
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screening
time
to access data.
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, people would not fully depend on
soft
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version
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versions
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of
resources
in order to keep their
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eyes
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healthy
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.
Secondly
, no one can hundred percentage rely on
internet
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the internet
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for all places and
time
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times
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. To explain, it always requires
charging
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a charging
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port, battery, wifi,
internet
connectivity, broadband, devices, certain subscription and much more which is not practically possible for all
time
. If anything is missing from these would lead problem to access data as per they want.
Hence
,
paper
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version is not
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in such
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demand like that as well as it is cheaper than it.
Lastly
, Online
resources
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make human free from two worries
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no physical burden to carry
it
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and not
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to give attention to misplace or damage by something. To conclude
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this
, in
upcoming
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the upcoming
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decades paper
resources
would not be fully replaced by the
internet
although
its
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free because it leads not only causes serious
eye
disorders but
also
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for
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many things to get access of
require
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data like connectivity and gadget.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessible
  • immediate
  • eco-friendly
  • cost-effectiveness
  • tactile experience
  • niche market
  • digital divide
  • credibility
  • misinformation
  • natural resources
  • minimalist lifestyles
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