Your friend has been offered a place on course at the university where you studied. He/She would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - describe where you lived when you were a student at the university - recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation - warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation

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Dear Aslı, I hope you’re doing very well these days. I’m writing you

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letter to you wanted me to advise you about the accommodation. As you know, I have just graduated from university

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year. When I have been a student for 5 years, I stayed in a flat

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to the Breakfast Café, and it is so close to the university. You can go to your course effortlessly

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walking.

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, both neighbours and workers are friendly. If you

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want to stay our my old flat, I’ll recommend the best way to find accommodation.

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worry about the money, because every flat is as cheap as possible. The best way to look for an apartment is that ask Mr Brown who is the oldest person living in the neighbourhood. He knows not only

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. If you ask him, you can find it easily.

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, I want to say that many students make mistakes when they choose accommodation. Some flats

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have lifts, so workers

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carry your furniture. Please be careful about

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warning. I look forward to receiving a letter from you. I hope you’ll find a good flat. Best regards, Mehmet

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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