Your friend has been offered a place on course at the university where you studied. He/She would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - describe where you lived when you were a student at the university - recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation - warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation

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Dear Aslı, I hope you’re doing very well these days. I’m writing you
this
letter to you wanted me to advise you about the accommodation. As you know, I have just graduated from university
this
year. When I have been a student for 5 years, I stayed in a flat
that is
next
to the Breakfast Café, and it is so close to the university. You can go to your course effortlessly
by
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walking.
In addition
, both neighbours and workers are friendly. If you
don’t
want to stay our my old flat, I’ll recommend the best way to find accommodation.
Firstly
,
don’t
worry about the money, because every flat is as cheap as possible. The best way to look for an apartment is that ask Mr Brown who is the oldest person living in the neighbourhood. He knows not only
areas
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but
also
neighbours
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. If you ask him, you can find it easily.
However
, I want to say that many students make mistakes when they choose accommodation. Some flats
don’t
have lifts, so workers
don’t
carry your furniture. Please be careful about
this
warning. I look forward to receiving a letter from you. I hope you’ll find a good flat. Best regards, Mehmet
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