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In many countries large amounts of foods are wasted. Why do you think people waste food in this way? What can be done to reduce the amount of food thrown away? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

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Humans are depending on
food
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 for their survival. With the new inventions in the
food
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 industry, a number of different
items
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 are introduced to
people
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.
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, a quite larger amount of
food
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 is wasted all around the world. The following essay will elaborate on the reasons why
people
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waste
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food
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 and how can minimize the
waste
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 of
food
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 with relevant examples.
To begin
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 with, the majority of
people
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waste
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food
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,
firstly
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 because today they have too many options in the market. To elaborate
further
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, nowadays we can see that there are many
food
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items
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 which are prepared daily and
as a result
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 the choices
people
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 have are unlimited. As an example, KFC has a variety of burgers and sometimes
people
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 get confused about what to eat.
Secondly
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, the price of cuisines is relatively cheap and any person can afford a meal for a minimum of $2. Since the prices are cheap,
people
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 buy different
items
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 which they won’t consume even, and ultimately they throw them in the bin.
In contrast
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, government and the public
people
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 can help to reduce
this
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 issue, because if the wastage of
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 is continued in the future the scarcity of
meals
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 will be high. On one hand, authorities can impose high taxes on
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items
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 where which makes
people
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 buy a limited amount of
meals
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 they want to consume. To exemplify, increasing the meal prices in cheap restaurants like KFC, and Burger King where
people
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 will twice in the future when buying two or three
meals
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.
On the other hand
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, as consumers, we can try to use the maximum amount of
food
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 we have rather than going for too many options. To conclude, individuals
waste
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food
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 today because the choices they have are skyrocketing and the prices of
items
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 are cheap. If authorities take in hand the issue it could be eliminated and
people
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 have to think several times before purchasing a couple of
meals
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • food waste
  • excessive
  • portion sizes
  • expiration dates
  • storage
  • preservation
  • inefficient
  • cultural
  • incentives
  • reduce
  • awareness
  • education
  • planning
  • organization
  • misinterpretation
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