In some countries, more and more people are hiring a personal fitness trainer, rather than playing sport or doing exercise classes. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

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currently it becomes very popular and common, I think it has not had a positive
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why
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I am writing about how it influences
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life? and
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so you will not be surprised by seeing its
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your life. After
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became viral ,
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it has some positive effects but it grows
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example ,they do not need to take much for getting information about an academic subject they just surf through the internet for less than one hour and collect a useful knowledge which they need.
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that
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because you will see its
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on the future generation . For some reason , I think it has a negative
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.
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, when you go to the gym with others you can find new friends and become more sociable.
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gym with others may bring out our competitive sense and you will get your exercise seriously .
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, you have to get more responsibilities , if you want to plan for your diet and exercise time and
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you have to get more responsible and it will help you become more responsible.I believe you will not be a successful person unless you try it and get more practice in it. In conclusion , I would state that the world is moving fast with the growing trend of hiring personal trainers and these resources are impacting negatively development in
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fitness
  • Health
  • Personalized
  • Effective
  • Workout routines
  • Motivation
  • Guidance
  • Busy schedules
  • Limited time
  • One-on-one training
  • Qualified
  • Experienced
  • Overall well-being
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