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One of the most pressing problems facing the world today is overpopulation. What policies do you think governments should adopt to address the causes and effects of this problem

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These days, politicians who govern different countries often talk about an important question regarding overpopulation since they have to find policy strategies to
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. To elaborate nowadays, people have increased in their numbers around the world over the years since they have a better life quality and a longer life expectancy. Indeed, many doctors who work in both private and public hospitals are able to cure a great variety of diseases including psychiatric disorders and chronic diseases people suffer from due to the fact that they might make an early diagnosis of a specific illness with
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 medical equipment and treat any ill person with more effective therapies.
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 to overcome the rate of death in any overpopulated land, sex education should be taught in any school.
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, since cars and industries usually make the environment more polluted , governments could start to use renewable resources to limit the amount of oil, coal and fuel people daily use. Admittedly , the increasing number of homeless living in any city
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 his or her house. In conclusion, I personally think that if politicians cooperated with the professionals who work in various fields, they would really solve any problem related to overpopulation.
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