Nowadays, there are many celebrities who are famous for their glamour and wealth rather than achievements. This is a bad example for young people. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

In the present day, it is true that a lot of famous figures are well known for their wealth and glamour

instead

of achievements and success. Some argue that

this

has a negative effect on teenagers, and I completely agree with

this

idea. On the one hand, there are several reasons why I consider

this

to be detrimental to young adults.

Firstly

, youngsters may be easily misled by their idols because they are not mentally mature enough to distinguish between what is right and what is wrong.

For example

, they would consider money and wealth

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of the utmost importance if their idols are famous for wealth.

This

is more likely to encourage people to believe in materialism, which will undoubtedly have a negative impact on society.

As a result

, students will desperately dream about being rich and they will no longer be eager

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knowledge and professional skills, resulting in a lack of a productive workforce.

On the other hand

, youngsters need a positive role model.

In other words

, they require someone who is knowledgeable and motivated to teach them and to open the door to a promising career path for them. Apparently, celebrities who are not famous for their achievements in science or society are not proper role models.

Such

well-known figures cannot benefit students in terms of studies and they only care about making a profit. In conclusion, an increasing number of famous people are known for the glamour and money they possess rather than their contribution to society nowadays, and I believe

this

could be detrimental to youngsters.