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In the past, most people spend their entire career working for one company, whereas people nowadays move from one job to another. What are the advantages and disadvantages of each? Which do you think is better? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Most
people
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 used to spend their whole career working for one enterprise while
people
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 nowadays change their
job
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 to another.
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 essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of each phenomenon and gives my opinion. There are several effects of staying at a
company
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 for the entire career. The
first
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 advantage is
people
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 are more likely to be promoted. If
people
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work
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 in a
company
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 for a long time, they would have more results there, and the boss will reward them according to their success.
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,
people
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 are more likely to get promoted.
However
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,
people
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 may dislike their
company
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's environment or
work
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, if they
work
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 for
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 a
company
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 in their entire life, they would lack the motivation to
work
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.
Likewise
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, if
people
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work
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 in a
company
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 for their entire
work
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 which does not pay a reasonable salary and fewer opportunities to be promoted, they will lose a number of chances to get a better occupation.
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, moving from one
job
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 to another is a double-edged sword.
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, we can have more chances to find suitable employment. We do not know what the
job
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 exactly is before we try, and we need to engage in
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work
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 and experience by ourselves,
then
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 we would figure out whether the
job
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 is suiting us, which means the more we try the more likely we are to find the right
job
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.
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, at the same time, we take more risks and take a lot of
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. We give up the
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 we have and choose another, but it could not good as before.
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, we may change our location move to another city and meet new colleagues, which costs a fortune and time. In conclusion, I believe it is better to change our
job
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 when necessary, even if we need to take risks, but it gives us more opportunities to find the best.
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