The parents of your Australian firend Chris have invited you to a surprise birthday party for for him/her write a letter to Chris's parents. In your letter Say why you think Chris will enjoy the surprise party Explain why you won't be able to attend the party Give the of a paln to see Chris at a different time

Dear Mr and Mrs Collins, Hope
this
find
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you well.
First
of all,I would like to tell you I am really thankful for inviting me to
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surprise
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suprise
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surprise
party
that is
going to organize for Chris 's
birthday
. Chris always loves
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surprise
suprise
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surprises
and I
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remember
remeber
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remember
the
last
time I
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surprised
suprised
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surprised
him for his
birthday
. I threw a
birthday
party
with our friends in his favourite restaurants. As soon as he came into,he started to scream and dance . I
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after
party
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he told me , he had had his best
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birthday
birhday
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birthday
party
.So
this
party
will be huge for him. unfortunately , I cannot join you all at
this
time , because I am really busy at work and I have an important meeting scheduled on the same day.It is really disappointing that I can not accompany you
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that amazing time.
However
,I hope to visit
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a
couple
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weeks after Chris's
birthday
, so we can go on the trip that we are planning for ages now. How's the climate over there? Here, we are sweating. Your Sincerely, Neda Ebrahimmagham
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