You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news. Write to your friend. In the letter: • Describe the house. • Describe the neighbourhood. • Invite your friend to come and see the house.

Dear Devie, I hope

this

letter finds you in healthy shape. I am writing because I am excited to give you some great news.

Finally

, I moved 3 days ago into my new home. So it is located in the downtown of Khalifa City along the national highway. It is a 3 bedroom with attached comfort in all rooms and 1 common comfort room for the visitor, fully furnished and complete amenities. What I like the most is the kitchen, the space is really amazing. I can prepare food and baked pastries without difficulties. Surprisingly, there is a mini grocery store on the corner of the road and 2 blocks away is Khalifa park with a free entrance fee. Our neighbours Mr and Mrs Sulaiman were really nice and hospitable, they came and meet us on the

second

day after we moved out of our old apartment. They brought some food that we shared while knowing each other. We will be having a housewarming sometime on the weekend, you can bring along your husband and kids. They can play in the wide garden. Mr and Mrs Sulaiman will be joining us well to celebrate the success of having our new home. Looking forward to seeing you soon. Regards, Analyn

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