You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own. Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club. In your letter: •introduce yourself, •say why you are interested in this sports club •ask some questions about the club e.g. facilities, members, costs
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Dear Sir or Madam,
The reason why I am addressing you is that I want to ask about some questions about your
sports
club
as well as
tell you my willingness to participate in it.
I am Tom Smith, a freshman at Community College and I have been studying at this
college for three months. To tell the truth, I am very keen on doing the exercise, so I searched for sports
clubs around us. As a result
, I have recently discovered that your sports
club
, Strongest, is by far the best one.
Due to
the fact that the college I am studying at now has no sports
club
, I need another one to attend since doing exercises regularly is an integral part of my life, so I am going to take part in your club
.
Regarding my question first,
Could you tell me the price of the subscription to the club
? Besides
that, you advertised that a person who would join the club
in the first three days of March could get a discount of 50 per cent. Is it available? And also
is there a wide range of sports
tools which members of the club
can use there?
I hope you will answer all my questions fully and I would be grateful if you reply in the near future.
Yours faithfully,
Tom Smith.Submitted by soglomovsarvar on
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coherence cohesion
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task achievement
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writing tone
The letter has a polite and appropriate tone for the context, which suits the task's requirements well.
task achievement
The clear introduction and the specific questions asked show good understanding of the task's requirements.
coherence cohesion
The logical structure of the letter from introduction, body to closing is well-executed.