You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own. Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club. In your letter: •introduce yourself, •say why you are interested in this sports club •ask some questions about the club e.g. facilities, members, costs

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Dear Sir or Madam, The reason why I am addressing you is that I want to ask about some questions about your

sports

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club

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as well as

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tell you my willingness to participate in it. I am Tom Smith, a freshman at Community College and I have been studying at

this

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college for three months. To tell the truth, I am very keen on doing the exercise, so I searched for

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clubs around us.

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, I have recently discovered that your

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club

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, Strongest, is by far the best one.

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the fact that the college I am studying at now has no

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club

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, I need another one to attend since doing exercises regularly is an integral part of my life, so I am going to take part in your

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. Regarding my question

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Could you tell me the price of the subscription to the

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that, you advertised that a person who would join the

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in the first three days of March could get a discount of 50 per cent. Is it available? And

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is there a wide range of

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tools which members of the

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can use there? I hope you will answer all my questions fully and I would be grateful if you reply in the near future. Yours faithfully, Tom Smith.

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coherence cohesion

Work a little more on organizing ideas within paragraphs for clearer expression.

task achievement

Consider providing more detailed information about your background or specific sports you're interested in to enhance task response.

writing tone

The letter has a polite and appropriate tone for the context, which suits the task's requirements well.

task achievement

The clear introduction and the specific questions asked show good understanding of the task's requirements.

coherence cohesion

The logical structure of the letter from introduction, body to closing is well-executed.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

225 words

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