1. You recently bought an electric gadget for your home. Your friend wants the same gadget and needs your advice. In this letter you should include: o What the gadget is o What you think about it o Advice about other alternatives your friend could buy

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Dean Johan, I am writing to you to express my view on a recently bought
television
.
However
, I have been a friend of yours since my Childhood. It is a smart
television
and it is about 120 inches in size, L.G. tv.
Although
it is connected to the internet and easy to access youtube, there has no gaming section in
this
gadget that I specifically bought.
However
,
this
is to value money gadgets and easy to connect with a mobile phone which has great Children what they benefit to watching children's activities done by mobile phone during parents' absence. I think so the best option of
television
. you can buy would be the Samsung HD
Television
with smart press access unable to buy money
this
I was because of the issue but you have a great financial background and it would be the best t.v. I have ever Seen in the Market. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. yours Love, Gunjan Gairola,
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