In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless.The only peopletravelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantanges.
In
modern
era, technology has improved in each and every field. Scientists are inventing different systems. Add an article
the modern
However
, they also
invent automatic vehicles
for society. The benefit of these vehicles
are
Change the verb form
is
driverless
. So some authorities predict that,
in Remove the comma
apply
future
the passengers will be Add a comma
,future
traveling
in automatic Change the spelling
travelling
vehicles
rather than self-driving vehicles
. I think these
notion has more disadvantage rather than advantages and the reasons Change the determiner
this
of
my disagreement are explained in the upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, if the four wheelers will be Change preposition
for
driverless
, so is affecting the labours, who can drive the cars, buses, trucks
for compilation. Correct word choice
and trucks
Therefore
, the country
economic condition will Change noun form
country's
also
decrease and the workers cannot have stable jobs. In addition
, the Gps system does not come out very well. Some
particular places, the Gps do not activate, in Change preposition
In some
this
context, passengers also
suffer from the devices. Even the cost of tickets will be high, so who
can travel in their daily routines, Correct pronoun usage
those who
they
cannot afford it. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Many
countries like India, Thailand, Change preposition
In many
shrilanka
, Correct your spelling
Sri Lanka
Shri Lanka
Bangladesh
workers are essential for nations. Correct word choice
and Bangladesh
For example
, in India the
most Correct article usage
apply
of
Change preposition
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
people
are traveling
Change the spelling
travelling
through
Change preposition
by
the
public transportation and the transport is not too expensive for them but if Correct article usage
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
people
are using driverless
transport, so it is costlier for them. So, they cannot pay enough money for that.
Furthermore
, security issues are a very Correct your spelling
common
comman
problem for Correct your spelling
common
driverless
transport, when vehicles
are connecting
with computer Wrong verb form
connected
function
, so Fix the agreement mistake
functions
the
hackers easily hack the devices and Correct article usage
apply
then
they will be misusing the controls.Not only that, if people
will use driverless
cars so the future generation will be not know
about driving and sometimes some Change the verb form
not know
emergency
can happen so they will not drive because they do not learn, how to drive the Fix the agreement mistake
emergencies
vehicles
.
Fix the agreement mistake
vehicle
On the other hand
, it is true that autonomous vehicles
are reducing the
accidents because they are putting Correct article usage
apply
many
Replace the quantifier
much
equipment
for that, Change to a plural noun
equipments
in addition
Change preposition
to the
the
automatic Correct article usage
apply
vehicles
reducing things like traffic jams, commute times, congestion and gas usage.
To conclude, people
should solve the
problems in their way and not Correct article usage
apply
dependent
on any electronic things. So it is Add a missing verb
be dependent
also
good for them and they can maintain their health. Sometimes robots do not have Correct your spelling
proper
Correct article usage
the ptoper
ptoper
judgement that Correct your spelling
proper
the
humans have, so in Correct article usage
apply
this
way self driving
is beneficial for individuals.Add a hyphen
self-driving
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