You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because he or she always has friends visiting. They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you. Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to you to express my dissatisfaction with my roommate and request another accommodation
next
term.
My main problem is that I cannot study in my room because my roommate always has friends visiting. He also
has parties which usually end early in the morning, several times a week. Furthermore
, he often borrows my things without asking me.
I cannot accept this
situation any longer. Especially because I have very important exams next
term and I really must study hard. This
is why I would be very grateful if I could have another room next
term. It would be most convenient for me not to have to share my room with someone else.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.Your's Sincerely,
Yours Obediently,
EmmaSubmitted by shyambala85 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite