Introduction
Nowadays, technological devices are becoming well-known.
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, computers, tablets and smartphones have become Linking Words
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situation has both advantages and disadvantages.
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First
of all, using computers is beneficial for children ,especially for their knowledge. Linking Words
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, there are a lot of useful free learning applications and sites on the Internet. Linking Words
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, everyone can be able to learn every topic that they want Linking Words
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as language, science and math. Linking Words
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, it does not matter where people are because if the tablet is charged, it is easy to access.
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On the other hand
, sometimes over usage of technology cause the worst healthiness. Linking Words
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, due to addiction to smartphones, many minors' mental health is declining. A study found that five out of ten children sent to psychiatric hospitals spend a lot of their free time on the computer. Linking Words
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situation affects the youth's physical fitness badly. For reason that using tablets for more than hours, causes obesity and motion. Linking Words
For instance
, after sitting on tablets,Linking Words
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eat something but do not notice how much I eat. Unfortunately, the appetite to eat is non-stop. So that it will become a symptom of these deceases.
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Conclusion
In conclusion, the number of youth who always use a computer in their spare time is increasing day by day.
In addition
, it affects their well-being even though it is helpful for them to study something. In my perspective, these circumstances have more advantages than drawbacks.Linking Words