These days, children have easy access to home computers, tablets, and smartphones and many spend a large part of free time using these devices. Dicuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, technological devices are becoming well-known.

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, computers, tablets and smartphones have become

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of children and

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situation has both advantages and disadvantages.

First

of all, using computers is beneficial for children ,especially for their knowledge.

For example

, there are a lot of useful free learning applications and sites on the Internet.

Therefore

, everyone can be able to learn every topic that they want

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as language, science and math.

Moreover

, it does not matter where people are because if the tablet is charged, it is easy to access.

On the other hand

, sometimes over usage of technology cause the worst healthiness.

Firstly

, due to addiction to smartphones, many minors' mental health is declining. A study found that five out of ten children sent to psychiatric hospitals spend a lot of their free time on the computer.

Secondly

,

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situation affects the youth's physical fitness badly. For reason that using tablets for more than hours, causes obesity and motion.

For instance

, after sitting on tablets,

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I feel hungry and

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eat something but do not notice how much I eat. Unfortunately, the appetite to eat is non-stop. So that it will become a symptom of these deceases. In conclusion, the number of youth who always use a computer in their spare time is increasing day by day.

In addition

, it affects their well-being even though it is helpful for them to study something. In my perspective, these circumstances have more advantages than drawbacks.