Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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require
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believe that they should be
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flexible
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in those specific
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should be allowed to
work
where they prefer to
work
if the
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workers can
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that they have the quality
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certification
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certification
to
work
in certain
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countries
contries
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countries
.
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in different places is tough and there are many challenges in life as well.
For example
, if
doctors
want to
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for
work
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public health and
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diseases
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vaccination
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vaccination
if it is necessary.
In addition
, the environment will be another important factor to concern. The climate may not
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similar
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countries, so
people
have to adapt
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when they
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a new place.
On the other hand
, though there are many difficulties to accept, there are many benefits to
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those professionals
work
overseas.
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,
doctors
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understanding
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cultures while curing patients. It is important to
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recognise
recongise
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recognise
local culture which can make
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communications become
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easier
earlier
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easier
.
Instead
of
focuing
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focusing
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diseases
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, it is more important to understand what
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desire. In
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conclusion
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conclusion
, I agree that some of
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professionals
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like
doctors
should be allowed to
work
somewhere they want if they can get the certifications to
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their abilities. It can help
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people
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people
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connect
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with different cultures and
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doctors
can
also
learn how to treat different
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from certain places.
Besides
,
doctors
or other professional workers can
also
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local
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local
residents when they
work
overseas.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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