Reporting of crimes and other kinds of violent news on television and in newspapers can have adverse consquences. This kind of information should be restricted from being shown in the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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agencies in recent times have started using loud language with very disturbing

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broadcasted over the air and using uncensored photos in the print

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creates a negative perception in

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and changes

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way of thinking. I strongly advocate

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of communications and the wrong publicity done by these agencies.

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channel, round the clock we see some or the other breaking

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; the reporting in

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digital age has crossed all boundaries. The reports are almost on each and every topic

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a different

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of Rooster crowning for 3 minutes till he falls down.

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, reporters have not spared anyone’s privacy

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, any small family matters are shown on National television

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, if any film star has given birth to a baby; his name, eyes,

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features are discussed on National or Global

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channels.

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, the information shown is 90% times biased and it will always have an agenda behind it. The effects

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has on every age group

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different as there is no restriction on the content. I propose to start censoring

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videos which

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violent video

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like some local fights where someone is beaten to death and paper

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showing a dead body soaked in blood. The

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of impression and negativity it spread in one's mind is unstoppable and particularly the GenX

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of feeding their brains with positive thoughts today

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is sowing seeds of negativity mixed with hatred. I

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to stop watching it and start moving to

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channels to understand both views. To conclude, governments should bring in a law which will put hefty penalties on these

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agencies in case they break the moral conduct of ethics.

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houses should

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and have an additional layer of experts before releasing any

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. Every citizen who watches and

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of information should be aware of the information he is consuming

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, I will quote a famous provoking thought "You become what you see and read".

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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