The continued rise in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

These days, one of the most important

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problems is overcrowding of the planet which is caused by a range of factors. I definitely agree with that statement and I think that issue may be really dangerous for people’s future in

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with, it should be unsurprising that an increase in medicine level is one of the overpopulation factors.

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, many decades ago when there was no special equipment and knowledge, people died from diseases

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as cold, which nowadays can not lead to a fatal end.

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standards, a person’s life expectancy rises.

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, the high production of security gadgets led to the growth of general safety which

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has an influence on an individual’s life duration.

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, there is an enormous number of different tools which are helpful in preventing different situations where people may be hurt or killed. In my opinion, the overflow of the population is one of the most important troubles which can bring humanity to extinction. The

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argument in favour of

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opinion is that there is a huge

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of planet resources which are likely to disappear in the near future if there

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no

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the continued rise of people.

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, a growing number of scientists supposed that car

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might face with absence of fuel soon.

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negative consequences on the Earth’s ecology

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as air pollution and changes

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climate. To conclude, overpopulation is a serious difficulty in the developed world which may bring

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humanity to

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disappearance due to the huge demand

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resources and environmental pollution. Personally, I think that problem has taken on a large scale which requires to be solved as soon as possible.