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With the rapid advancement of communication technology: smart phones, tablets and other mobile devices, some people believe that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The evolution of technology makes
communication
 easier by incorporating multiple
devices
 and applications rather than by old-fashioned dial phones only. Many people think that
this
 is a negative development and I disagree with
this
 notion because the modern way of
communication
 is affordable, accessible and make life easier.
To begin
 with,there is a range of mobile
devices
 are available in the market ranging from higher cost to reasonable rates and can be purchased in easy instalments as well without a requirement of cable connections
therefore
 easy to carry,
consequently
. everyone can afford these
devices
 in order to communicate with family,friends and colleagues at work.
In addition
 to
this
, these mobile
communication
devices
 provide great relief to parents. In the past when children go out of the house there was no mode of
communication
 and easy availability of the telephone.
Therefore
, parents become worried and concerned about their offspring's well beings.These
androids operated
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 tablets and mobile phones make the life of parents stress-free to a certain extent.
Although
,every development has its negative aspects
for instance
 excessive use of mobile
devices
such
 as talking to friends for a longer duration which may distract people from their studies and work.
However
, I believe
this
 can be managed and curbed by relevant awareness and education. In conclusion,
communication
 via mobile
devices
 makes life easier, more comfortable and stress-free.
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