Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter : 1. Explain the reason for the noise 2. Apologise 3. Describe what action you will take Start with Dear, Mr. Zaveri and Mr. Dalal

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Dear Zaveri and Mr Dalal, I received your letter regarding the complaint you had about the noise in our flat. I am writing

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letter to let you know that there are wedding rituals taking place at our home as it is my sister's marriage

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week. Many relatives have arrived in the past few days and they are doing rehearsals for the big day. I am really sorry for the disturbance

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caused to you and your family due to the loud music. We really didn't want to hurt anyone and we understand that it can be disturbing for anyone. If we were at your place we would have

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complained.

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, I assure you that we will take care of the volume and noise from now onwards. We will ensure that all the curtains and doors are closed while rehearsing so that the neighbours don't get annoyed and can get good sleep. Thank you for your patience and I am really sorry for the inconvenience caused. Yours faithfully, Sophia

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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7 paragraphs

172 words

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