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It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is the best for the individual and for society. Do you agree or disagree

#people #society
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 it does not sit well with me for
people
 to be in a union before they are in their
30's
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Firstly
 in our African culture
people
 would marry at a young age and they would face some much hardships.
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instance
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 one gets married at 20 soon after university.There's no
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form of investment he/she has made ,eg house or car for the family As soon as he marries the wife gets pregnant adding more responsibility to the fee they had.
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 many suffered in poverty,due to improper planning because of
society
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 culture.
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 on my point of view when one is in his
20s
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 it's time to give out your focus
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 your children .So that when you reach 30 you will have time with your family.
Thirdly
 most
people
 will be immature for marriage requires maturity.As an
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 they will be a lot of divorces .Which will lead to a broken generation as most men will not give maintenance to their wives , leaving them vulnerable to any kind of abuse for them to fend for their children.Due to divorce
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 many will find relief in drugs,
prostitution
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However
 to a lesser extent getting married before
people
 are in
their
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30s
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 has benefits
in
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society and the individual.As couples can build their fortunes together.
Furthermore
 being able to play with their grandchildren at a tender age.
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addition
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 it's quite beneficiary to ladies to have children early before they are in their late 30s.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fertility
  • Maternal health
  • Psychological stability
  • Social maturity
  • Economic benefits
  • Shared responsibilities
  • Ancestral customs
  • Cultural imperatives
  • Personal development
  • Career establishment
  • Societal norms
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Divorce rates
  • Life decisions
  • Subjective wellbeing
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