In many parts of the world girls and boys are educated together in co-educational or mixed schools. Some people think that girls and boys benefit from being educated separately in single-sex schools. To what extent do you agree with this view?
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a mixed schools
is beneficial is differences that exist between boys and girls that are somewhat big and it is important for youngsters to understand them. It encourages one to learn more about one’s society.
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it can enhance one’s insecurities when being rejected.
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