You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter • explain your situation • describe your problems • tell him/her when you think you can start.

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Dear Mr Eric, I am writing

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letter in regard to the higher secondary teacher post that I attended for the interview

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month. I got the appointment letter two weeks back and

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, I would like to thank you for paying trust in me. I accepted the offer to join on May 25th,

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, unfortunately, I am not able to join your institution on that day! My mother had an unavoidable surgery

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week and I spend whole the time assisting her.

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it was not life-threatening, it made my mother's health weak.

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, she required constant aid from me and faced a long road to recovery. Since I am an only child, my mother depends on me. I would like to formally apologize for not being able to start my career at the proper time and I believe that I can begin the work by the end of the month June. I hope you understand my situation. Yours sincerely, Ammu Jose

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

164 words

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You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter • explain your situation • describe your problems • tell him/her when you think you can start.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Do you think the advantage of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Gap between rich and poor countries. It's the responsibility of richer countries to support poorer countries while others think it's the responsibility of poorer countries. what is your opinion?

Some people think person happiness is directly related to economic success, while others believe this depends on other factors. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

In some countries, owing a home rather than renting is very important. *why might this be the case *Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In some parts of the world. It is becoming popular to research the history of one's own family. Why might people want to do this? Is it a positive or negative development?

In some countries, owing a home rather than renting is very important. why might this be the case Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?