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Learning to play team sports is an important part of a child’s education. Do you agree or disagree? Give reason for your answer. And include any relevant experience from your own knowledge.

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The diagram illustrates the stages
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 making a
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 facility using concrete canvas
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. Overall, the process involves eight stages. It begins with manufacturing the
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 and ends with storing the
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 in the
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 area.
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, the process starts with producing and packaging the dry concrete
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 with fibrous top
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surface
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surface
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 layer.
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, these
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 are
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 delivered and unwrapped after reaching the appropriate destination. In stage four, there are lots of processes that go on in making the
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 area.
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, pegs are made and held firmly on the ground and a cloth-like material, which is 10 metres wide is spread on the ground with the help of a tractor as the pulley. Following
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 is pumped into
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 material in order to make it spacious and firmly held into the ground. A door is
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 created to allow access to
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 reservoir. At stage six, the fibrous surface is
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 watered to make it even stronger. It is
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 left for about 20-24 hours to set and made
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 for use.
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,
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withing
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 24 hours,
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the
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 area is ready for storing goods.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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