Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games. What are negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?

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access to technology on a wide basis and a lot of

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computer

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almost every day all day.

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is mainly because of the lack of

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of solutions that should be implemented to deal with

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impacts of playing computer and mobile

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dependence

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techniques is due to

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have a lot of

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for amenities including smartphones and laptops.

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games

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may be interesting to

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because a child thinks that he has nothing to do or has not found any entertainment

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see to they see how they use a laptop to play and want to play too. There is one solution to the

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of

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haven’t motivation

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study or

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something, because they have

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motivation by money, others

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want to goal.

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teenagers will be spending time in education or household activities.

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and he hasn’t time for entertainment. In conclusion, there is actually

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for

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teenager’s

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entertainment. Today’s kids are very dependent on digital

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because it is

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of technology is

distraction

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with

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learning something.