Modern appliances in the home have become more common, leaving no doubt that advances in technology have improved our lifestyle. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?
Modern
appliances
like smart electronic device
indeed become more common and of Fix the agreement mistake
devices
course
that advances in Add a comma
,course
technology
have influenced our lifestyle
. I agree to to
that statement.
Nowadays, in every Change preposition
with
Change to a singular noun
household
households
we can see a lot of modern Add a comma
,households
appliances
that replace the old one
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ones
such
as air
fryer
, smart Fix the agreement mistake
fryers
refrigerator
, electric Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
stove
, modern Fix the agreement mistake
stoves
dishwasher
and so forth. Fix the agreement mistake
dishwashers
This
tools
helps us to make our Change the determiner
tool
house work
easier and reduced our time to do Correct your spelling
housework
that
errands. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Besides
that, things like air
fryer makes
our Change the verb form
make
lifestyle
healthier than before by eliminating oil in our food. Also
, modern appliances
helps
us to control and monitor our electronic devices Change the verb form
help
in
fingertips. Change preposition
at
For instance
, I can control my lamp and my air
conditioner through my phone. So if i
forget to turn them off when Change the capitalization
I
i
left my Change the capitalization
I
house
, i
can simply turn them off with the application Change the capitalization
I
in
my phone. It helps me Change preposition
on
lot
when it comes the day to Add an article
a lot
pay
electricity bills.
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paying
On the other hand
, modern appliances
is a man-made technology
so there are some flaws and negative effects that followed. With the presence of modern appliances
, human
will be lazier since they do not need to do the traditional way of cooking, cleaning the Fix the agreement mistake
humans
house
and et cetera. They can just easily use robot
to clean their Fix the agreement mistake
robots
house
and use Correct your spelling
air fryer
airfryer
or Correct article usage
an airfryer
microwave
to cook their food. Fix the agreement mistake
microwaves
In addition
, things like smart electronic devices can not work properly unless it is connected to internet
. So if we often to Add an article
the internet
forget
turn off the lamp or Add the particle
toforget
air
conditioner, when internet
is down, sure we have to pay bigger electricity bills. These events influenced us to a lazier Add an article
the internet
lifestyle
since we spoiled
by Add a missing verb
were spoiled
the
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apply
technology
.
In conclusion, modern appliances
influence our lifestyle
in both ways, positive and negative. But, with all benefits and drawbacks listed above, i
still agree that advances in Change the capitalization
I
technology
have improved our lifestyle
due to the benefits can outweigh the drawbacks.Submitted by matlbert20 on
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