Modern appliances in the home have become more common, leaving no doubt that advances in technology have improved our lifestyle. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

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appliances

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like smart electronic

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devices

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indeed become more common and of

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that advances in

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have influenced our

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. I agree

to to

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that statement. Nowadays, in every

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households

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we can see a lot of modern

appliances

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that replace the old

one

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such

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as

air

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fryer

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fryers

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, smart

refrigerator

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refrigerators

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, electric

stove

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stoves

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, modern

dishwasher

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dishwashers

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and so forth.

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tools

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helps us to make our

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house work

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housework

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easier and reduced our time to do

that

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apply

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errands.

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that, things like

air

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fryer

makes

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our

lifestyle

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healthier than before by eliminating oil in our food.

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, modern

appliances

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helps

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us to control and monitor our electronic devices

in

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at

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fingertips.

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, I can control my lamp and my

air

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conditioner through my phone. So if

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forget to turn them off when

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left my

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,

i

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can simply turn them off with the application

in

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my phone. It helps me

lot

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when it comes the day to

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paying

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electricity bills.

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, modern

appliances

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is a man-made

technology

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so there are some flaws and negative effects that followed. With the presence of modern

appliances

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human

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humans

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will be lazier since they do not need to do the traditional way of cooking, cleaning the

house

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and et cetera. They can just easily use

robot

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robots

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to clean their

house

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and use

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air fryer

airfryer

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an airfryer

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or

microwave

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microwaves

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to cook their food.

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, things like smart electronic devices can not work properly unless it is connected to

internet

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the internet

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. So if we often to

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turn off the lamp or

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conditioner, when

internet

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is down, sure we have to pay bigger electricity bills. These events influenced us to a lazier

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since we

spoiled

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by

the

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technology

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. In conclusion, modern

appliances

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influence our

lifestyle

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in both ways, positive and negative. But, with all benefits and drawbacks listed above,

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still agree that advances in

technology

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have improved our

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due to the benefits can outweigh the drawbacks.