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I am going to talk about a time when I lost my
money
. It was about two years ago when I was at college and I had to pay my tuition fee because it was long due. I placed
this
money
in my
purse
and put it in my bag, I mean my suitcase on Campus. So the time that I decided to go and pay my tuition fee at the bank, I looked for
this
purse
for like thousands of years I could not find it. So I started suspecting my roommates even though that was a bad thing to do. I had no choice but to ask them since I was in the same room as them. None of them told me that she has found my
purse
. It was a black
purse
, and I started panicking because I had no other means of getting
this
money
back. And my mum would have killed me if she heard that I have lost the
money
. I went to my house warding to report the incident to her, and she
also
, together with other people helped me search the
purse
. Not knowing all
this
while I had placed it under my pillow. Something prompted me to look under my pillow, yet still I ignored it because in my mind I remembered vividly that I placed the
purse
in my bag, and yet, I found it anyway. I was really excited and delighted to have found the
purse
because I would not have known what I would have done if I genuinely lost
this
money
. And in the long run, I hurriedly went to the bank to pay the fees.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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