an international company is opening branch in your town and you will like to work for this company write a letter to the human resource manager of the company in your letter say what kind of work you are interested in and explain why you want to work for the company and ask some questions about the company
Dear Miss Amanda,
I am John and I have worked in the marketing department of Royal Bank
company
for 5 years. My current position is sales supervisor of the North market of Imo state in Nigeria. Recently, I learned that your bank will open a new subdivision of American Express Bank next year, so I strongly expect to come to Owerri and work there.
My wife is from the Imo state which is why I can use Igbo like local citizens and speaking the language will make us win more consumers in the community and I can see the core value of your company
aligns with my goals. I absolutely believe that I am suitable to work in that country with 5 years as a sales supervisor and managing team including twenty staff with numerous achievements acknowledged by the company
, I hope to work as the new branch manager. I assure you that I will try my best to develop abroad market of our company
in Nigeria.
I would like to know the plans in terms of staff salary if in foreign currency or local and the plans for growth in the local community and your security measures as it is a high risk.
I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
John Edward.Submitted by henikeassociates on
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task achievement
Provide more detailed information on your past achievements to strengthen your suitability argument.
coherence cohesion
Clarify or separate your reasons for wanting the job and describe them in individual paragraphs.
coherence cohesion
Make sure each paragraph clearly expands on a single point, ensuring a more robust structure.
task achievement
The letter clearly addresses the purpose and explains the interest in a specific job role, displaying a solid task response.
coherence cohesion
The closing and greeting are polite and appropriate for formal correspondence.
task achievement
The letter maintains a suitable tone for a formal business letter, ensuring appropriateness in context.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite