Today family members eat fewer meals together. What is your opinion on this?

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In the olden days, families used to eat food by sharing and talking with each other. In many ,regions
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is a part of their culture and tradition.
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strengthens the bond between the members and instils a sense of harmony.
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, due to the advancement in technology and the increase in digitalization
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trend is declining rapidly and nowadays folks either lack the
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or are least interested in spending
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with their families and having meals with them is the least of their concerns. I strongly believe that
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is a negative development as it has devastating impacts on many aspects of an individual's life which will be discussed in detail in the forthcoming paragraphs.
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, The primary reason why people are not engaged in family meals is due to lack of
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. It is a well-known fact that in
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fast-paced world individuals are struggling to attain jobs and even though they earn them, they are completely immersed in work. The majority of the working population has a hectic lifestyle and does not get sufficient
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for many of their essential activities.
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,
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often leads to them eating at a convenient
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which may not match with others and
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leads to the loss of family bonding.
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trend continues as
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passes and eventually isolates individuals from their family members and they feel lonely.
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leads to many mental health problems
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as depression and anxiety .
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, many youngsters and adults after completing their studies move out of their houses and go abroad or to different regions in search of job opportunities or for higher education purposes.
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reduces the number of members in a particular family and often it is not possible to have meals together.
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, I moved out of my house when I got a job. During that period I did not have access to food with my parents.
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continued for a couple of months till I
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reunited with my family. ,
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has a major disadvantage. Mostly, parents who are old and weak are left alone at home which instigates a feeling of loneliness in them and as a
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they feel that they have become less important and that they do not need to stay in
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world.
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has resulted in a lot of suicides and a lot of similar incidents have happened in the past years. The family loses its harmony and peace
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. In conclusion, restricted
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and increasing migrations have led to a loss in family bonding which has negatively impacted society as it has resulted in
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serious life-threatening incidents as well as taking a toll on the mental health of individuals.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • societal changes
  • modern work schedules
  • individualism
  • technology's influence
  • foster
  • communication
  • fast-paced lifestyle
  • adverse effects
  • dietary health
  • social development
  • restoring
  • isolating effects
  • digital media
  • face-to-face interaction
  • strengthening family bonds
  • family cohesion
  • crucial element
  • societal health
  • policies
  • initiatives
  • traditional values
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