Many students find it difficult to pay attention at school what are the reasons for this? What could be done to solve this problem?

Most of the
students
are
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losing
loseing
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losing
their focus
in
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on
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their studies day by day, especially at school. As well as, it is a serious
problem
for their future life because it will
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to
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their future lifestyle.
Also
, it has many solutions and
this
essay will discuss solutions to
this
problem
. On the one hand, some
students
play computer games
instead
of studying. One of the
first
reasons is probably because of
this
their teacher. If their teachers can
instill
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a love of learning in their
students
, their
students
never
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interested in different types of games,
such
as at school.
Furthermore
, teachers only punish their pupils during the lesson
then
pupils are simply bored at that time pupils lose their attention to
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. One of the best solutions to
this
problem
is that tutors should create an interesting atmosphere in the classroom at
this
time
they
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can pay attention to
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.
On the other hand
, not only teachers but
also
parents
are responsible for their
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children's
childeren's
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children's
education. So, their
parents
need to motivate them to focus every day.
For example
, when my relative's
parents
went to work in another city and their child's schooling was very slow.
Therefore
,
parents
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control is important for the child to learn. All
parents
should increase their control over their children's education. In conclusion,
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of attention
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children's education is a big
problem
. If children are directed to something they are interested in they will focus on it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • concentration
  • attention span
  • distractions
  • technology
  • boredom
  • tiredness
  • engagement
  • learning disabilities
  • teaching techniques
  • classroom size
  • family issues
  • health problems
  • motivational strategies
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