Due to many human activities animal's and plants' life is in danger. Some think that this cannot be changed. Some think that government should do something. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Wildlife and plant life are under threat because of human activities. Few
people
believe that it would not be changed. While others think that government
should take steps to protect them. I tend to incline towards the latter notion.
On the one hand, there are various reasons why people
think that firstly
, due to the high rate of the population which increases the demand for goods and products made by animals
and plants. To elaborate, now people
are more relying on their basic necessities such
as food, cosmetics, medicines, and papers which are particularly made of animals
and plants. Moreover
, due to different and new growing diseases scientists are experimenting on animals
to save human life which sometimes ends with sacrificing test animals
. For example
, many people
are annually suffering from cancer worldwide so, in favor
to protect them rodents and mice are used as test Change the spelling
favour
animals
to discover new medicine thus
, scientists are left with no option but to use animals
to prevent human life threats.
On the other hand
, I believe that the primary reason why the government
should take this
initiative to protect them is that the public has faith in the government
to take certain steps in this
regard. To explicate, they should make strict rules for forests and wild areas such
as by organizing the safety guard and taking strict action against illegal poaching of animals
. In addition
to, this
they should not only preserve rare or threatened animals
in zoos so they can survive but also
should provide a naturalhabitats
for their better Correct your spelling
natural habitat
natural habitats
Correct your spelling
preservation
preserving
preservtion
. Correct your spelling
preservation
For instance
, the Indian government
has been running the programs of international animal protection and plant preservation schemes in schools as well as a local recidence
with the help of orientations and other modes. As result, Correct your spelling
residence
resident
people
can move one step forward toward animals
and plant protection.
In conclusion, Fix the agreement mistake
animal
although
the points are in the favor of the use of plants and animals
due to the increasing needs for a population that cannot be controlled by people
, I, however
, still believe that with the help of the government
people
will be educated not to overuse both of the source
.Change to a plural noun
sources
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