Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

A group of
people
think that staying in a specific country where I face trouble like social for using other countries
language
. I completely disagree with
this
proposition and will discuss relevant points along with precise examples and back up my view.
First
of all, nowadays when
people
know more than one
language
so when
new
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a new
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place
people
do not understand any foreign
language
speaker can
use
another
language
, even
there
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though there
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are many advanced technologies are available,
which
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that
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people
use
for translation.
For example
, now
people
are using different types of apps which help to translate voice after scanning any
language
to convert other languages.
Secondly
, now
human
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humans
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are so smart that's why they can understand many signs, which
people
use
to understand something even
people
use
translator
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a translator
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person, which helps to solve problems,
moreover
, when
people
stay in a specific area for a certain time, they can learn and speak their speech.
For instance
, there are many refugees are leaving in Bangladesh. they
are come
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from Myanmar and Pakistan,
however
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they can speak
Bangladeshi
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the Bangladeshi
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languages
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language
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Bangla
,
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because they are living
long
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a long
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time,
moreover
many foreigners are being business in Bangladesh and their speech
are
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not Bangla yet they live without any problems. in conclusion, it is obvious that
people
are dividing their argument always, yet
people
trying
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to overcome any problems and try to cope
new
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situation
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situations
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however
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,however
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, again I proved my statement
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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