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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

#experts #children #language #school #outweigh
Scientist
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Scientists
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 have found out that for
children
 to start learning a foreign
language
 at primary
school
 is
better
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the better
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 way than starting in secondary
school
. There are plenty of cons if
children
 start learning a foreign
language
 in primary
school
, but others think that learning a foreign
language
 IS BETTER
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the primary
school
.
To begin
 with, a
lot
 of people will argue that foreign
language
IS
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need teaching AT THE
FIRST
 CLASS of
school
.
Firstly
, a great number of
students
 should learn
hard
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subject
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subjects
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at
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 the 5th
grade
.
For example
, a
lot
 of
students
 start learning
subject
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 of chemistry in the 7th
grade
 and a large number of
students
don’t
 understand
this
subject
, because they
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learn
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 lately.
Secondly
,
students
starting
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 learn
foreign
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a foreign
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language
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languages
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, they can
don’t
 have motivation and understanding. It is actually
problem
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a problem
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 for these
children
, who
don’t
 want to study.
On the other hand
, a large number of
students
 will get used to a heavy load, it is very important for them
,
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 because a
lot
 of subjects adding in elementary
school
 and high
school
. It is necessary to teach
children
to
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 difficulties, if
children
don’t
starting
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tostarting
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 learn difficult
subject
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subjects
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 after 3rd
grade
,
for
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this he
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they
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 will have no understanding of the
subject
.
For instance
,
foreign
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in foreign
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lesson
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lessons
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, they need to start with an easy topic.
Moreover
, they become smarter to understand a foreign
language
 if they start learning it in 4th
grade
. In conclusion, I prefer that
children
 learn it at a reasonable age
that
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 there are will
not
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no
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problem
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, it is important that
children
’s understanding, because for that reason a
lot
 of
children
 develop for future.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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