Recent research has confirmed that human activity has become the greatest threat to plant and animal life. Why do you think this has happened? How can we reduce our impact on the natural world?

The population of human beings is growing rapidly due to the increasing quality of living, which is a result of the new technologies that help us every
day
, advanced medicine that longer our life and many other factors. In my opinion,
although
this
growth affects flora and fauna by harming
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every
day
, there are solutions that may help to reduce the damage caused to our nature,
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will be described
further
.
To begin
with, it is well known that
people
have always been predators. While there are already at least hundreds of animals dying every
day
on farms or factories that produce food for supermarkets, some individuals
also
do illegal hunting by killing rare species which lowers the number of living animals rapidly.
In addition
, another reason is air pollution which is dealing a huge amount of damage to plants every
day
.
For example
, a large number of factories produce dangerous chemicals that affect on growth and life of trees in the area around them. Even though there is a large list of things
people
should stop doing to avoid harming nature, human beings can at least stop using cars,
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and reduce the number of factories that are dangerous to the world.
This
can help to reduce air pollution and noise so we can get back to the normal and right level of chemicals in
air
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.
For instance
, there are a lot of examples during covid lockdowns of how
people
affect
life
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the life
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of animals. Species that were never seen in city areas came out when citizens stopped using transport and producing loud noises. To conclude, humanity is a big threat to wildlife as
people
usually care only about their happiness, forgetting about important things around us that are being harmed.
However
, there is
large
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list of important changes that everyone should take
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action in order to prevent horrible changes on the Earth.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem
  • habitat destruction
  • urban expansion
  • deforestation
  • industrialization
  • pollution levels
  • emissions
  • agricultural practices
  • monoculture farming
  • chemical fertilizers
  • pesticides
  • climate change
  • fossil fuel combustion
  • extreme weather patterns
  • overfishing
  • poaching
  • logging
  • invasive species
  • ecological balance
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