The effective way to reduce industrial pollution is to tax the companies that cause them. Discuss both views, and give your opinion.

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While some argue that
companies
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paying taxes for environmental issues caused by them will be productive methods, others opine that they are already in charge of reducing the problems as well as humanly possible. In
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essay, both sides will be discussed and I believe that the latter opinion seems more plausible.
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and foremost, industrial
pollution
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is beyond what the public is capable of coping with as an individual.
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, if there is water
pollution
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and citizens have to deal with it, not only is it efficient because they do not have enough time and
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, but it is
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almost infeasible to expect them to clean it up professionally.
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, if the government hire professionals with plenty of
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that
companies
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paid, both efficiency and accuracy will produce a satisfying result.
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,
companies
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should take place in reducing
pollution
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.
On the other hand
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just because
companies
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make a great amount of
money
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does not necessarily mean that they should be in charge of all environmental issues, some of which they do not even cause.
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, many facilities and factories have been encouraged to install purifiers as necessary so that they do not cause
pollution
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to begin
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with.
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, fumes coming out of factories mostly
compose
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of water vapour that inflicts no damage to humans or nature. In conclusion, since many
companies
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are already not involved in any industrial
pollution
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that leads to environmental problems, it seems unfair to force them to pay
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for it.
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, I completely disagree with
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opinion despite their financial support will be of great help.
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