Some people claim that not enough of waste product from homes is recycled. They say that the only to increase recycling is for the governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Considering how

waste

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the waste

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product from

home

is one of the main cause of climate change,

thus

, motivating people to recycle their own

waste

. But, not many people realize how important and urgent

this

case are. So, several communities especially

who

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advocate green living, are urging the government to

legalizing

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legalize

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and

also

facilitating

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the

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apply

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recycling from

home

. I agree with recycling from

home

, considering how important for us to manage our own

waste

and be responsible

with

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for

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it.

First

,

waste

from

home

is mainly

a

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food scrap from the dining room or the kitchen.

Moreover

, when it is in composting phase, it needs to have a right well-aerated, shaded condition. If the condition does not meet those requirements.

therefore

, it would kick-start

anaerobic

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an anaerobic

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compost system, which

produce

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produces

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methane. So when it

is went

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up

to

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into

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the atmosphere it would make a layer of

big

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the big

a big

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reflective

sphere

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and

increasing

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increase

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the earth's

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temperature

temperatures

tempherature

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temperature

.

This

is why the

phonemon

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phoneme

phone on

nowadays is called global warming, it

increasing

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increases

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sea

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the sea

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surface,

defrost

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defrosting

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ice in

arctic

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the arctic

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,

earth's

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the earth's

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pole, and

threaten

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a lot of species

life

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of life

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.

Second

, by composting food scrap from

home

we could make our own compost that

are

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good for plants.

Additionally

, it would be a good way to start

the

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home

farm, and we can reduce the use of artificial fertilizer which harm the soil and

it's

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its

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bacteria inside. Several people consider

this

case as one of the

cause

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causes

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of Germany's flash flood in 2020 decades, the usage of artificial fertilizer changed the structure of soil's absorption ability and does not withstand to

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absorb

absorp

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absorb

water faster as it should

be

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apply

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. In conclusion, I am agreeing and

also

supporting

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support

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the notion of

recycle

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recycling

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from

home

.

First

, it would be benefitting the world by reducing a tiny level of methane from our own

home

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homes

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, and

second

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,second

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we can make our own homemade compost, saving the soil and

it's

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its

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health.