In order to address the problem of a lack of food resources in the world, scientists have developed genetically modified crops. These modified crops. These modified crops are likely to have a great impact in solving food shortages in the developing nations. To what extent do you agree that they will solve this problem?

Lack of
food
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become a serious issue due to
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overpopulation
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over population
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for years. Population density
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been increased,
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whereas
wheareas
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whereas
limited
resource
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and lands have
been
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decreased
from
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the past.
Food
producing
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will not be enough for all people if we still use
traditional
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process
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to produce
food
. Science and technology have been used to solve the issue along processes while
produce
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food
. From the beginning, there are new scientific ways to plant, control stable nutritions, decrease plant disease and reduce harvest time.
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,
hydopronics
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hydroponics
is a way to plant with water,
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have
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been used widely as it's easy to maintain and control.
In addition
, farmers use technology to help harvest goods in their enormous lands, so
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can be reduced 10 times compare to
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work.
Furthermore
, there are alternative
food
purposes to solve
this
problem. Scientists experiment
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lab-meat
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lab meat
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such
as beef, chicken and shrimp.
Instead
of waiting for
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animal
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to grow until ready to eat, they create cells of meat and grow in
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just in a week. Nutrition and taste are the same as real meat and
also
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unnecessary
unnescessary
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unnecessary
nutrition can be cut out. Scientists have worked hard to find new solutions to produce more
food
within a short time. At
first
,
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is too expensive and
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rich
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. In the
next
10 years, it will be
effortable
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affordable
for
general
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people.
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some people do not trust processed
food
and prefer organic
food
. They believe that they will easily get sick from eating
this
food
everyday
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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