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Band 7.5

You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a news story in your country explain why people are interested in it say how the story personally relates to you

#facebook #friend #country #news #item #story #people
Dear Linda, Hope you and your family are in great health. I got your letter
last
 week; I am glad that you like to keep yourself updated with the current happenings around the world and particularly in India.
To begin
 with, the primary aim of importing 8 Cheetahs from Namibia
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the Prime Minister, Narender Modi is to protect the ecosystem from
further
 decay.
Moreover
,
this
 event coincides with the 72nd birthday of Mr Modi.
Additionally
, the country has set the target of bringing 50 Cheetahs in the
next
 5 years.
This
 is major news for the country and people are curious to know about how these big cats adapted to the Indian environment and help in reviving the wildlife post-extinction in 1952. As you know, I work in the forest department and some part of
this
 project will come to us in the
next
 few days. It is a great opportunity to understand more about wildlife and its role in conserving the planet. I believe
this
 is what you are looking for. I will share more updates with you when I go live on
this
 project. Yours Sincerely Bhawna
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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