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Dear Linda, Hope you and your family are in great health. I got your letter

last

week; I am glad that you like to keep yourself updated with the current happenings around the world and particularly in India.

To begin

with, the primary aim of importing 8 Cheetahs from Namibia

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the Prime Minister, Narender Modi is to protect the ecosystem from

further

decay.

Moreover

this

event coincides with the 72nd birthday of Mr Modi.

Additionally

, the country has set the target of bringing 50 Cheetahs in the

5 years.

This

is major news for the country and people are curious to know about how these big cats adapted to the Indian environment and help in reviving the wildlife post-extinction in 1952. As you know, I work in the forest department and some part of

this

project will come to us in the

few days. It is a great opportunity to understand more about wildlife and its role in conserving the planet. I believe

this

is what you are looking for. I will share more updates with you when I go live on

this

project. Yours Sincerely Bhawna

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

190 words

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You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a news story in your country explain why people are interested in it say how the story personally relates to you

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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